The creative criticism which most people provided was that there was a lack of imagery, a lack of persuasion (that it would be a good idea to film this), a lack of influences and a poor narrative.
I then added a few images to my presentation, added some more stylistic influences and changed the narrative of the music video slightly; from a maniac protester walking down a road to burn something, to a pyromaniac building a fire.
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