Feedback on Animatic

I showed my animatic to some members of my class, including teachers and I got the following feedback.

My animatic is slightly out of time with the song, this is because I was editing to the shot lengths (correct to the nearest second) but this is not the way to go about doing this, as I need to edit to the beat. I will ensure that I do this properly for my actual video.

Also, I need to think more about the lighting necessary for the high contrast images that I require. I will need to do this by using strong, white lighting.

I need to make my shots fast and use lots of visual effects in order to make some of the longer shots more effective and to keep the viewers attention.

I also need to make sure that the audience are aware of the plot, as some of the fire shots come before the shots where the main character builds the fire. upon reflection, this will be my biggest issue but i will overcome it.