After my feedback, I reviewed it and picked up on the biggest point given, that my ending isn't as strong as it could have been. So I threw some ideas about with Mrs Allison (my teacher) and have decided that I should leave the plot with some sort of cliffhanger or some sort of dark and rather ominous ending; for example, I could have him looking back over maps or making some sort of homemade bomb.
Also, instead of him throwing images of houses of parliament on the fire, i will have him throwing a political front page/newspaper on the fire as it links back to the shot at the table.
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